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 Friday, November 09, 2007

We’ve started a new book. Maryann has already finished it. I’ll be reading mine on the way to New York this weekend. Go out and get yourself and copy and let us know what you think. Here’s the first page. H

All right, so I listened to my wife. After all, I’ve been doing it for nearly forty years, I should have stopped now? Boy, is she going to feel guilty.

            So there I was standing at the corner of Fifty-seventh Street and Park Avenue, minding my own business, waiting for the light to change. My mission was to buy blue shirts, Jane insisted that I buy more blue shirts, they bring out the color of my eyes, she said, they give me a little color. My luck, there was a sale at a fancy store on Fifty-seventh, go there, she said. So I was waiting at the corner, to my left a great-looking woman in her fifties, a real Manhattan type, all dolled up, loaded with jewelry, great body, great legs. To my right, a handsome young fellow wearing a sport shirt and the tightest jeans I ever saw; I noticed the lady glancing at him approvingly. Me, she didn’t seem to notice. At sixty-four, I’m much more age-appropriate for her than he is but, hey, looking is free, let her look. And that was my last relaxed thought on earth because that’s when I noticed the car coming straight at us, right onto the sidewalk. An old man was slumped down at the wheel, eyes closed. His was the last face I ever saw in my life.

 

Excerpted from I Never Saw Paris: A Novel of the Afterlife by Harry I. Freund. (Carroll & Graf 978-0-78672-054-5)


posted on Friday, November 09, 2007 3:20:04 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)  #    Comments [12]
Monday, November 12, 2007 11:39:56 AM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
Yes, I've finished it. I really wanted to like it. But...the story has been done many times before, and done much better. Trite and hackneyed, one-dimensional characters with stereotypical lives, cliche-ridden with half-hearted attempts at depth.

Really! The elderly black woman; hard-working, God-fearing, poor, sweet with a sad story. The young gay man with father issues. The middle-aged woman who hadn't found real love. The over-middle-aged man who regrets treating his loving wife so poorly.

yawn.

And the angels. They were inane. Was this a drop into first grade CCD classes with the mean nun?

I think I was supposed to have some sort of emotional/spiritual epiphany with the group of five banding together. I felt bullied by the author "see how wonderful my characters came out? You should be as strong" Turning the last page only gave me a sense of relief, both for the characters finally reaching their destinations, and that I could start a new book.
Tuesday, November 13, 2007 3:32:42 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
I'm about halfway through the book. I've read everybody's story but Irving's. You're right about the cliches: gay man raised by a policeman who married his high school sweetheart, black woman who worked hard and is a true believer.

INSP reminds me of The Five People You Meet in Heaven. There are moments that seem included to deliberately choke the reader up. It's a book to read when you need a good cry.

I am enjoying hearing about the different people's lives and how in the end most of them can feel good about their lives, through seeing an old familiar face or their children's actions after their death. And I always think it's interesting to see another person's take on the afterlife. Most of us have visions and hopes about what comes next. It can be comforting to hear something so positive. Freund's take is especially nice: no pain, no fear, just relaxation and floating.
Wednesday, November 14, 2007 4:52:12 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
Uh oh. I'm starting to think my first impressions about this afterlife were very very wrong.... Pretty interesting now that I'm three-quarters of the way through it.
Thursday, November 15, 2007 7:56:35 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
All right. I lied. I didn't take the book with me to New York. I had a crime novel from Soho that I needed to finish, Matt Beynon Rees' second in his Omar Yussef series. While the good deeds of Mister Yussef seemed improbable at times, the guy got under my skin and I was sorry when he drove away. Plus, the book has a great ending -- something novelists have a difficult time pulling off.

Also needed to finish Preston Allen's really scary novel about a gambler (Akashic). I had appointments to see both the publishers and I wanted to have something to say about their authors.

So... I'll read the Freund book this weekend and am really looking forward to it. I LOVE the discussion so far.

PS. Whitney, in the office, went so far as to say she thought the characters were in hell.
Monday, November 19, 2007 4:05:18 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
I feel small shots of mother-guilt... "If you haven't anything nice to say, don't say anything at all". It isn't that I didn't like the STORY, I just couldn't stand the characters. Or the writing.

I feel the need for a saucer of milk.
Monday, November 26, 2007 7:55:29 AM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
A chatty little book with echoes of Wilder and Wilde. Five people dying at the same accident was reminiscent of the bridge at San Luis Rey; Angel Malakh as Brother Juniper, Clarissa as Dona Maria, daughter Twinky as Dona Clara. Freund's phrases common - no finesse of phrase; and there could've been better character differentiation.
Perhaps best for the five to avoid the ending angst would be to do what Wilde said to a companion when they were in their porphyry tombs and the trumpet of the last day of Judgment is sounded: " pretend we don't hear it."
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